tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post4539025845857761889..comments2023-07-12T05:20:11.008-07:00Comments on Falling Toward Mythopoesis: Challenge Accepted!Sarah McCabehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10985261436020635823noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-84334761550820431202011-09-17T06:25:47.998-07:002011-09-17T06:25:47.998-07:00Thanks for sharing, but the story isn't done a...Thanks for sharing, but the story isn't done at this point! (I know, I'm one to talk about unfinished flash stories.)<br /><br />I'm in your Campaigner Fantasy group, so hopefully we'll run into each other again soon down the Campaign trail.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-69699339179911532402011-09-13T14:01:33.766-07:002011-09-13T14:01:33.766-07:00Oh, I like this one. I haven't read anything e...Oh, I like this one. I haven't read anything else you've done so I don't know if you've outdone yourself, but this is really good!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08616276555920544920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-89281756552063792362011-09-12T17:54:42.095-07:002011-09-12T17:54:42.095-07:00Uh oh!! Poor guy! My curiosity lands me in trouble...Uh oh!! Poor guy! My curiosity lands me in trouble too...lucky for me I haven't come across any gold, irritable gods. ;)Amanda Milnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07582468814920761586noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-47792922606510075852011-09-12T17:31:55.258-07:002011-09-12T17:31:55.258-07:00An element of mystery. Good lead in to intriguing ...An element of mystery. Good lead in to intriguing the audience.Totsymaehttp://www.totsymae.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-38268044446324513832011-09-11T12:59:22.985-07:002011-09-11T12:59:22.985-07:00Hi there, I'm finally making it to your blog o...Hi there, I'm finally making it to your blog on my ginormous list!<br /><br />Great job on the challenge piece, I want to read more! It has a very Egyptian feel to it ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-79681486289591301872011-09-11T10:26:34.698-07:002011-09-11T10:26:34.698-07:00Thanks so much for all the wonderful feedback! I&#...Thanks so much for all the wonderful feedback! I'm so glad to story, as short as it is, is so effective.<br /><br />For the record, he does live though his deed will not pass without consequences.Sarah McCabehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10985261436020635823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-33654169142845086122011-09-10T18:16:27.328-07:002011-09-10T18:16:27.328-07:00Excellent job with the tension. I really got a fe...Excellent job with the tension. I really got a feel for the setting, which is hard with such a short piece. Nice work.Stephaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09247707812061900770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-14580885579355696722011-09-10T15:54:13.376-07:002011-09-10T15:54:13.376-07:00Very fun- it's never wise to anger the godsVery fun- it's never wise to anger the godsAlica McKenna Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159703224812368401noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-72947448969823691852011-09-10T14:47:01.306-07:002011-09-10T14:47:01.306-07:00Amazing piece. So much in 200 words. I wonder wh...Amazing piece. So much in 200 words. I wonder what happens to him next.<br /><br />I'm a new follower from the campaign. Have a wonderful weekend.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-8653325211944363432011-09-09T16:29:15.159-07:002011-09-09T16:29:15.159-07:00You're just like me, can't stray from the ...You're just like me, can't stray from the current MS :-) I do hope he lives through this!Deniz Bevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-68547001874384020862011-09-09T13:56:40.801-07:002011-09-09T13:56:40.801-07:00Wait, what happened! Was the god annoyed with him ...Wait, what happened! Was the god annoyed with him for sneaking into the sanctuary? Or was it something else entirely? <br /><br />You've pulled me in, that's for sure. Great writing!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-72670287314718449862011-09-09T12:28:37.666-07:002011-09-09T12:28:37.666-07:00Wow. That was powerful. Well done!Wow. That was powerful. Well done!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00769602845843608247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-53300316652140124962011-09-09T06:52:10.517-07:002011-09-09T06:52:10.517-07:00Interesting. Thanks for the peek into your book.Interesting. Thanks for the peek into your book.Mildred R Holmeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12859939075587298735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-20159517275586803852011-09-09T02:51:06.057-07:002011-09-09T02:51:06.057-07:00So that's what goes on in the Scientology Cent...So that's what goes on in the Scientology Center. <br /><br />mood<br /><a href="http://moodywriting.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Moody Writing</a><br /><a href="http://twitter.com/mooderino" rel="nofollow">@mooderino</a>mooderinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01523337588830695638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-85200475559579221262011-09-09T02:30:50.081-07:002011-09-09T02:30:50.081-07:00You've built some great tension in this flash....You've built some great tension in this flash. Nice work.Sylviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02913456656863545074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-46229588979133709822011-09-08T23:28:07.596-07:002011-09-08T23:28:07.596-07:00Interesting that so many of the doors in this chal...Interesting that so many of the doors in this challenge lead to death and disaster. Great job. Mine is #279<br /><br />And btw, welcome to the <a href="http://amloki.blogspot.com/p/sign-up-for-rule-of-three-blogfest.html" rel="nofollow">Rule of Three Blogfest</a>!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-88565527162929932452011-09-08T22:44:30.787-07:002011-09-08T22:44:30.787-07:00Very nice! Love the Egyptian influences too :) Gon...Very nice! Love the Egyptian influences too :) Gonna have to get in on these platform shenanigans :)Jamie Gibbshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15168603412367448706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-9087403045638507502011-09-08T20:47:02.150-07:002011-09-08T20:47:02.150-07:00Great tension. Nice job. Mine is #72Great tension. Nice job. Mine is #72Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-23065159493240721852011-09-08T20:20:28.053-07:002011-09-08T20:20:28.053-07:00Love! Poor guy, getting a little too inquisitive a...Love! Poor guy, getting a little too inquisitive and curious for his own good. You do a great job with description, and I love the tension as Sollon is pushing open the doors, sweat dripping down his forehead, etc. <br /><br />Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-59896306242034394612011-09-08T19:38:06.398-07:002011-09-08T19:38:06.398-07:00Heh, sometimes you are refused things for a reason...Heh, sometimes you are refused things for a reason!! Nice piece!jasonbeinekehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03111343158720558403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-830396334515793052011-09-08T17:44:12.773-07:002011-09-08T17:44:12.773-07:00Punishment for going into the forbidden - great st...Punishment for going into the forbidden - great storySonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-10983597080182350552011-09-08T15:39:20.083-07:002011-09-08T15:39:20.083-07:00Thanks so much for the positive responses, everyon...Thanks so much for the positive responses, everyone! It always feels great to get that kind of feedback.Sarah McCabehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10985261436020635823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-47878728983475895412011-09-08T14:37:18.825-07:002011-09-08T14:37:18.825-07:00Hah! I second David's comment. Nice work! :)Hah! I second David's comment. Nice work! :)Carrie Butlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01540590799406170410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-29386154969479650422011-09-08T12:52:45.708-07:002011-09-08T12:52:45.708-07:00Great tension here. I was chewing my lip. Very d...Great tension here. I was chewing my lip. Very detailed. I hope he didn't die!Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07524878248746427258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3614806041076628929.post-34738354066237937162011-09-08T12:17:27.060-07:002011-09-08T12:17:27.060-07:00It's amazin you packed such suspense into 200 ...It's amazin you packed such suspense into 200 words, and I'm still left wondering, what happened to him?Mynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.com